SCRIPT:FADE IN:INT. – LIVINGROOM DESK- NIGHTSUPER: “”R.L, early 30-something sits at her computer desk and ponders the blank word document in front of her. A bead of sweat forms on her brow.MANUSCRIPT:R.L sits at her computer desk, the scorching lamp shining on her face as she stares at the blank computer screen. A bead of sweat rolls down her brow. It’s three-o-clock in the morning and she sighed aloud, looking at the time in the lower right corner of her computer. She’d been sitting in her darkened living room for hours now not being able to sleep, but still not able to write anything either; the chalk white document in front of her still only showed the blinking cursor as evidence for her “writing”. Get it together, she thought, as she cracked her knuckles and placed her fingers on the keyboard.Screenwriting and novel writing have special pros and cons of each, whether you’re traditionally published or self-published, or whether you’re making an indie film or shopping a script around to film houses. This is a topic that hits home for me being that I started my serious pursuit of professional writing with scripts before writing fiction novels. The process in hindsight for script writing is similar to manuscripts, but these are very different beasts. For me when I start any story idea, I watch it in my mind first. If I can’t imagine it in my own head, how will anyone else? Makes sense to me. After that I write detailed “story worlds” where I set the scene ( sleepy mariner town or a post-apocalyptic wasteland),
then the characters I want to see (i love large ensemble casts), then I break all of that down further until I know intimate details like, what each character’s favorite color is to what their favorite food choices may be.) When that’s said and done, I then write out my plot map and set up my “mini-movie” formula to ensure that I’m hitting the correct beats needed to keep things moving, interesting and full of suspense.Once all of this has been plotted out, the fun really begins as words are either going to fly out of me and end up on the screen, or I’ll sit there without a clue as to what to write next. The same is true when I’m writing a manuscript as well. I plan and plot in a very similar way, but I have to think a lot more. In a script, the director and cinematographer will be able to build a set to show watchers the scene and the mood being conveyed. In novel writing, you have to actually be able to do that with words to immerse your reader, but also be clever about it too. No one wants to read three paragraphs on how good a banana tastes to the character, or how sunny the day was. You have to find a happy medium and that is where I ran into a lot of trouble at first.With scripts, they want a fast page turner, 90-120 pages of pure entertainment, without any fuss. After being so used to writing like that, my first manuscript was pretty skinny, so instead of faking my way through it, I picked up some books and read. When I got the hang of how much description others used, it helped to open my mind up and be able to “show instead of tell”. A lot of people think that phrase is only true for manuscripts but it’s not. In scripts, you are required to do the same, just less of it, which has its own challenges. I remember giving a script to a good friend of mine who is a pretty popular director right now, and he told me that the V.O’s (Voice over’s) I had in much of the script killed the story. He told me that the best scripts in this particular genre, did the showing, without needing the V.O’s at all, and made a bigger more dramatic impact. It blew me away and in that instance, I ended up with lots of short descriptions instead of actual dialogue, which made the suspense level go from 5 to 11 (on my imaginary suspense scale). So you have to achieve the very same things in similar ways but follow very strict guidelines in a script. If a producer has an hour to kill but can’t get off page one in a minute or less, he/she probably won’t bother reading it unless it’s a “Lord of The Rings” caliber situation. The mechanics will depend essentially on what you’re writing and what the emotion is you’re trying to convey and knowing that with detailed outlines of your story will help you achieve it for both..Script: Fast paced, little description, page turner, 90-120 pagesNovel: Fast paced, good descriptions, page turner, length is up to youIf you want to give scripts a try, get yourself some good software like Final Draft, or Writer Duet which is free. I’ve used both and when/if you are collaborating with a group, Writer Duet allows you to talk with your partner and see script changes in real-time. It also works for manuscripts written by author collaborations as well! Also, download some Hollywood scripts, a lot of them are free so you can get a feel for the format. It’s the same advice people give with fiction writing: Read your genre!I say all this, not because I’m an expert, I am most certainly not, but to say to do your homework and research. Being an indie in either field requires a lot of hard work. I find being an indie author to be rewarding with the freedom and control but it’s no different from being an indie film-maker.I thought the vampire script market was saturated, lol! But I won’t despair, writing requires an audience or building one and if you want to take it seriously in either medium, you have to be a go-getter and have confidence in yourself and what you write. Don’t give up because something is hard or one person says something didn’t work for them. Find beta reader’s and editors, preferably recommended from other reputable authors in your circle.SCRIPT- INDIE FILMMAKER: Have a good script, find funding, market, attract A-list talent (not as hard as you think), establish distribution, get paperwork in order, secure talent, film if all the stars align just right. (And none of this happens in order by the way. Sometimes you get talent with nothing but an idea and luck, or you have everything else and can’t find any recognizable talent interested, which doesn’t help distribution efforts. HARD WORK.)NOVEL- INDIE WRITER: Have good manuscript, publish e-book, format for paperback, publish that, find fan base, market, advertise promote, watch rankings, social gatherings, social takeovers, launch parties, giveaways, discounts, write more, relevant blog posts, conferences, seminars, networking. ( No particular order other than a manuscript is needed before anything can get moving essentially and you still need money to do marketing. HARD WORK)These look pretty similar and it is apparent that most of the work happens AFTER your masterpiece is completed or nearly completed. Neither is for the faint of heart as you can clearly see.“Write, Publish, Edit, Repeat” is my motto. Emphasis on edit for both script and manuscript. Don’t put in months of hard work, to have it all mean nothing because you couldn’t afford an editor. Grammarly is free if that’s your only option and will point out lots of mistakes. Print your manuscript/script out chapter by chapter or scene by scene and read it. You will be surprised at the amount of mistakes you find and fix, and then even MORE surprised at how many your editor will find even after you’ve done all that. It’s worth every penny to put your best foot foreward. Again these are just my thoughts and experiences and not meant to be the definitive explanation of all things regarding either industry. I’m still learning everyday and I’m sure I have lots more to go.All in all, I’ve enjoyed the journey of both and will continue my pursuit of story-telling no matter where it will lead: Oscar or NYT Best-seller list. A girl can dream, “write”?
Thursday, March 23, 2017
Thursday, March 9, 2017
Meet R.L. Jackson. Author Extraordinaire.
1- Where did your idea for this novel come from?
I had the story rolling around in my head for a while but honestly, I get inspired from music. Full on montages spring about sometimes so between that, and the feeling I had to write a different story that was original helped shape the novel.
2- What quirks of your characters, if any, come from real life?
Ummm lol let me see, I think for my character Lana, it's her ability to tell it like it is and cut the b.s comes DIRECTLY from me. The important thing with that quirk is being able to take it, if you can give it.
3- Did you have a favorite character- one you grew attached to?
I think I've grown attached to both main characters. They're these young people literally tripping and stumbling through life and I want to do them justice and give them the story they deserve.
4- Did the plot take off on its own, or did you know exactly where it was going?
I knew how I wanted it to end, but the start and journey definitely took off in its own.
5- Was there any point that you closed the laptop and said- I can't do this?
Lol like every other day but I had to push through until it was the best I could make it.
6- Do you play music when you write?
Oh yes especially when I'm stuck with a scene. I play a song that matches the mood and "watch the scene" in my head then I correlate in the manuscript.
7- What is your life prepared you for being an indie author?
Being an aspiring screenwriter for sure. I've spent years writing scripts, getting optioned, having the project fall through, creating wonderful relationships and learning how the industry of entertainment worked from that side. That helped in certain aspects but indie authoring is another best and just as much work if not more.
8- What actors are playing your characters?
For Kayden Ian Somerhalder for Lana Kat Graham. lol I love The Vampire Diaries so they'd be first pick.
9- What advice would you give indie authors?
Write, Edit, Publish, Repeat. But take your time and make sure it's a story you want to tell, it's the best you can make it before sending to an editor or beta, then take advice on your story from a constructive point of view. If the advice helps and makes your story better, do it. If it doesn't don't. You ultimately decide what's happens here. Just be smart, be bold and get it done.
10- What are you working on now?
A lot lol. I'm writing the sequel to "Crashing Into Me", I've started another awesome passion project that I can't mention yet, but I'm bursting with excitement to announce as well as writing scripts. The work never ends but it's exciting stuff and 2017 will be amazing!!
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Wednesday, March 8, 2017
I would like to introduce you to Alex Carver, the creative writer behind the Inspector Stone series!
1- Who is your favorite character that you've written and why?
I like Zack Wild, who features in my next release, there are elements of me in the character, as well as some wish-fulfilment, and I put him through a bit of hell, which was fun to do.
2- Have you hated any of your characters?
Probably the bad guy in Written In Blood, which is my next release, he's a very unpleasant character who does some horrible things.
3- What scene was the hardest to write?
The most difficult one I can think of was in Where There's A Will, Inspector Stone finds out his grandmother has cancer, it's not a long scene or even very involved, but for me it was difficult because it mirrors my life to a degree, my own grandmother died of cancer so I was writing something I had experienced when I did that scene.
4- What is your favorite part of being an author?
That has to be the ability and the opportunity to take something or someone I see and create an entire story around it, it's loads of fun.
5- What books did you read growing up?
I've been a big reader for most of my life, but the book that stands out most for me from my childhood was Lord of the Rings, I read it when I was about 12, I also read Bram Stoker's Dracula, which got me hooked on vampires as characters.
6- How do you research?
Usually I do a google search for the information I'm after and then cross-check the information that comes up on multiple sites to ensure what I've found is right; if I can, I'll use a professional or well-respected website to get the information
7- Is there any crime you've read about that you've said, no- I can't write this?
I'd like to say I'm prepared to write about anything, so long as I feel I can handle the subject respectfully, and without glorifying it in any way, after all, but if I'm honest, I don't think I could write about abuse, especially of children. I can't imagine coming up with a storyline that would involve that kind of crime, and I certainly don't think I could write I book that handled the topic in a way that wouldn't offend people.
8- Do you plan or let it develop as it's happening?
My writing is a mixture of both; I try to be organised and plan thoroughly before I get started on writing a book, but every so often an idea just leaps into my mind and I have to get to the writing and see where I'm going to be taken.
9- Where do you expect to be ?
I have about a dozen novels written on paper, I expect to have all of them released, and to be making a living from them, and probably working on some new material as well.
10- What are you working on now?
I'm in the final stages of editing Written In Blood, a thriller about a serial killer terrorising a small English village, on pre-order now and officially released on , and I am working on the 2nd book in my Inspector Stone series, which will be out later in the year.
Some interesting and difficult questions there, thanks
Friday, February 24, 2017
We’re thrilled to be talking to V’sair from Michael Phillip Cash’s, The Battle for Darracia series. It is a pleasure to have him with us today at Pimp That Character!
Thank you for your interview, V’sair. How old are you and what do you do for a living?
I am an 18- year old prince living on the planet Darracia. I’m currently studying to be King because they won’t let me take the Fireblade. They think I’m too weak.
Can you tell us about one of your most distinguishable features?
I am light blue with white hair, I wear the royal braid of honor. I’m not built like my father who’s the size of a house. I’m more like my mother from the Plantan species. They want me to build up my brain because I don’t have the muscles.
What would I love the most about you?
I’m sweet and considerate, a bit shy.
What would I hate the most about you?
I’m rich beyond belief, and I only have eyes for Tulani, my mother’s assistant.
Where do you go when you are angry?
I take a ride on Hotha, my white flying horse, to the Deep Fells.
What makes you laugh out loud?
Tulani makes me see the absurdities of life. My half brother Zayden got me drunk – that was pretty funny.
What is in your refrigerator right now?
I don’t know, you’d have to ask my servants.
What is your most treasured possession?
What is your greatest fear?
I will not make a good king, and I will not be able to unite this fractured world, bringing peace and prosperity to Darracia.
What is your idea of a perfect day?
Being with Tulani and riding my horse Hotha, above the Hixom Sea and seeing the diverse people of my world happy and peaceful.
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Thursday, February 2, 2017
Today I am taking over Sarah Noffke's Facebook group. It is called Awesome Reading Marathoners. Check it out. My party runs all day with some great giveaways! I've done this before and it is so much fun. It starts at 8am PST and runs all day. I hope you will join us! https://www.facebook.com/groups/230477383991808/